‘The warmth of the water caused the wet cedar planks to slowly perfume the air with the sweetness of flowing sap. Looking above the clearing of the cabin, the tangled branches seemed to reach up to the distant stars creating a jagged picture- framing both the night sky and crescent moon.
The late hour was made darker by the dense canopy of trees and brush painted deep shades of blue and gray.
Despite the soft illumination of her silhouette he was still able to take in the strength of her quite presence.
Through her shadowed face he knew she was looking at him, just as she always did. What was she thinking? She seemed to gaze at him with both sadness and clear desire. How can both feelings and thoughts inhabit the same space and time yet separately carry through the minds of both Juan and Adriana.’
………AND SO THE EDITING AND WRITING CONTINUES.